Jeromia's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Birthday 21]

Well dude, you already have tons of momentum now, as you're already capable of producing quality and creative products (unlike most people around NG, like me >:D).

Anyways point is, once you professionalize your work, I think people will take way more interest. Don't know whether you already have or not (I'm no animator) but your stuff looks more then awesome, so if you keep up with your improvement rate, you're guaranteed something, somewhere... (well in just what your required anyways)

If that makes you feel better (or anyone else) great, but that's I have an outsider's perspective so I'm probably wrong >_> *sadface*

[Madland Trailer]

Looks awesome. Plus you didn't give the plot away (like they do in hollywood) so I'm fine with the trailer work.

Looking forward to your thingy in the future :)
P.S: try to relax HAHA :P

[Madness One]

For all those that don't get it, this is a reconstruction of the first 2 combat madness episodes... you know, where hank decides to "kill the sheriff" sort of thing. Instead of all that occurring, this happened.

Well, that's what it looks like anyways >_>

[Pencilmation #27]

These are always a good chuckle to watch :)

[Incident:101A]

Another nice, quality madness short. But DAMN IT AXCON! You ruined the plot you freaking spoiler alert(ist)

[Paradigmadness]

Considering that you guys did a creative take on the madness series (rather then the reoccurring stuff you see from others) I gave you a 5/5

However, I still think that there is room for improvement within the short but otherwise I rather liked it :)

[UNICORNS]

Click dah unicorn... easter egg :P

[Madness Trollification]

:D this is the sorta thing you expect from a good madness tribute

Well done :3

[Rovion - Frostbite]

I wasn't satisfied with the choreography of this animation. It's pacing was too slow, and at times it didn't make sense (the green guy didn't really fight back, he just stood there most of the time). I suggest studying some of the epicness around NG to see how others made there's interesting.

One piece of advice when you make your scenes, try not to draw them out for too long. When the blue guy hit the green guy into the side of the cliff and saw the inside of their base, the whole "this is what's inside" scene (where you see everything inside the base) was too long. Avoid doing these sort of scenes, they draw away the interest of the audience.

Otherwise this is some great animation work. It was funny at times (especially the ending, as I was thinking about the "I like trains" kid :3). It's just that the choreography that needs work.

Zalfurius responds:

You are totally right, some of the scenes were too long, and I really need to work on the choreography. I had zero epxerience in any sort of fighting scene (the only thing I'd animated before this was some fellow failing at pole vaulting). I will work on it and try to make it much better next time. Thanks for the awesome review!