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Jeromia

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The series needs some more improvements but it doesn't detract too much from the story. The characters are colorful and the story is well written.

Just a few more improvements and it'll be 5x more awesome :D

:O
IT KNEW MA NAME! XD

hahaha was not expecting that.

That's some good parodying there :)
Keep it up and you'll be fine XD

This reminds me, I have to do my maths homework >_>

NO! IT'S NOT A SCAM

All you do is buy 100,000 time traveling thingies and you'll be able to travel COUNTLESS OF TIMES! XD (MO HAHAHAH loophole found!)

Anyways, awesome animation dudes, I enjoyed it :D

Awesome... but too short sadly :( and hence the half-a-star... cos I'm hungry and I wanted the other half :"(

I liked it, but some things need improving, like when the guy with the red jacket turned around... or when slenderman was walking around. Further, the scene where slenderman cries is a tad bit too drawn out. Make it maybe 2-3 seconds shorter (sounds stupid that I say that, but it kinda doesn't feel... um... 'even'?)

Anyways it's a nice joke, and it made me laugh a bit, and it's difficult to make good jokes via animation, so I give you props for that. I decided to give you a 4/5 in vote and 3.5 in review.

I rather liked this animation :)
It had a beautiful story that was executed well, despite it being short.

Anyways, here's the aesthetics:
Sound & Music
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- The music fitted very well with the short. I have no idea what the lyrics were, but I don't think it matters in this case, as it works, as it's the sort of song that gives the listener a sense of longing and as the story seems to revolve around a flashback, I think it works :\
- Dialogue wasn't required, and in fact it added further to the story, rather then reducing the value of the story, as most people can't recall precisely what occurred say 5 years ago or so (back to the flashback thingy :\ ). Good call in my opinion; or good use of circumstance if you couldn't find anyone to voice act :3

Graphics & Images
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- The characters were drawn very well. It almost felt like an actual professionally drawn anime character
- Animations requires a tiny bit more polishing at some scenes. However, most of the actions look natural, so this is a small issue really.
- Backgrounds (and anything that wasn't a close-up) were not drawn, but that doesn't matter. You've selectively used real images and changed them up to fit what you wanted (or that's what I think anyways, for all I know you might have drawn them to look like that :3) and honestly, that just makes it unique in my opinion.
- Objects that were close-up were drawn accurately and defined quite well, including reflective objects and objects that absorbed/reflected light. They all looked natural.

Overall, I gave it a 4.5/5 for review and 4/5 in vote.
Again, a beautiful short.
Well done :D

P.S: ARG! This was supposed to be a short review, and instead I go all ballistic D:< . Darn me and my brain :"( *cries*

Honestly, there's nothing to fault with this flash... it's amazing and it's inspirational. Well, actually except one thing. I believe that there's an unsung hero in this video - the musician that played that song. You could even say that beauty can (and has being) be interpreted through music as well :)

But um heh, actually the diversity of the interpretation of beauty is only limited by our imagination... So you could even interpret beauty by something as boring as business-law if you were talented enough >:P

Anyways, awesome work dude :D
5/5 simply because of the message, the simplistic-ness of the animation (colors are replaced by shades of gray for example) and the music... Which one day, I'll try playing that for myself :)

One of those rare animations that made me laugh. Honestly dude, this is original as hell, so well done...

Only issue that puts down the animation is that the voices need a bit more love, (but then again, it makes it a bit more funnier in some cases, other then the black guy, he's voice sounds like there's static in it. [yes, I realize that sounds a bit racist; it's not meant to be >:P])

But honestly, that is overshadowed by the punchline and the cringing effect that Russian Roulette has. So yeah, well done.

Hello there. The name's Jeromia. I play and record live music and put it up on Newgrounds. That's about it really. Oh yeah, I sometimes review movies/games too >:3 ~~~~~\o/~~~~~~ (but that's just my excuse for procrastinating XD)

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