A nice reworking of the original epicness... but obviously if it went like that their wouldn't be a damn squeal :3
A nice reworking of the original epicness... but obviously if it went like that their wouldn't be a damn squeal :3
The series needs some more improvements but it doesn't detract too much from the story. The characters are colorful and the story is well written.
Just a few more improvements and it'll be 5x more awesome :D
:O
IT KNEW MA NAME! XD
hahaha was not expecting that.
That's some good parodying there :)
Keep it up and you'll be fine XD
This reminds me, I have to do my maths homework >_>
NO! IT'S NOT A SCAM
All you do is buy 100,000 time traveling thingies and you'll be able to travel COUNTLESS OF TIMES! XD (MO HAHAHAH loophole found!)
Anyways, awesome animation dudes, I enjoyed it :D
Awesome... but too short sadly :( and hence the half-a-star... cos I'm hungry and I wanted the other half :"(
I liked it, but some things need improving, like when the guy with the red jacket turned around... or when slenderman was walking around. Further, the scene where slenderman cries is a tad bit too drawn out. Make it maybe 2-3 seconds shorter (sounds stupid that I say that, but it kinda doesn't feel... um... 'even'?)
Anyways it's a nice joke, and it made me laugh a bit, and it's difficult to make good jokes via animation, so I give you props for that. I decided to give you a 4/5 in vote and 3.5 in review.
I rather liked this animation :)
It had a beautiful story that was executed well, despite it being short.
Anyways, here's the aesthetics:
Sound & Music
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- The music fitted very well with the short. I have no idea what the lyrics were, but I don't think it matters in this case, as it works, as it's the sort of song that gives the listener a sense of longing and as the story seems to revolve around a flashback, I think it works :\
- Dialogue wasn't required, and in fact it added further to the story, rather then reducing the value of the story, as most people can't recall precisely what occurred say 5 years ago or so (back to the flashback thingy :\ ). Good call in my opinion; or good use of circumstance if you couldn't find anyone to voice act :3
Graphics & Images
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- The characters were drawn very well. It almost felt like an actual professionally drawn anime character
- Animations requires a tiny bit more polishing at some scenes. However, most of the actions look natural, so this is a small issue really.
- Backgrounds (and anything that wasn't a close-up) were not drawn, but that doesn't matter. You've selectively used real images and changed them up to fit what you wanted (or that's what I think anyways, for all I know you might have drawn them to look like that :3) and honestly, that just makes it unique in my opinion.
- Objects that were close-up were drawn accurately and defined quite well, including reflective objects and objects that absorbed/reflected light. They all looked natural.
Overall, I gave it a 4.5/5 for review and 4/5 in vote.
Again, a beautiful short.
Well done :D
P.S: ARG! This was supposed to be a short review, and instead I go all ballistic D:< . Darn me and my brain :"( *cries*
Honestly, there's nothing to fault with this flash... it's amazing and it's inspirational. Well, actually except one thing. I believe that there's an unsung hero in this video - the musician that played that song. You could even say that beauty can (and has being) be interpreted through music as well :)
But um heh, actually the diversity of the interpretation of beauty is only limited by our imagination... So you could even interpret beauty by something as boring as business-law if you were talented enough >:P
Anyways, awesome work dude :D
5/5 simply because of the message, the simplistic-ness of the animation (colors are replaced by shades of gray for example) and the music... Which one day, I'll try playing that for myself :)
Hello there. The name's Jeromia. I play and record live music and put it up on Newgrounds. That's about it really. Oh yeah, I sometimes review movies/games too >:3 ~~~~~\o/~~~~~~ (but that's just my excuse for procrastinating XD)
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